Heidi Soltis
Ms. Wilson
Brit Lit B
8 May 2013
A Modest Proposal
Ireland
was a time of “widespread misery and poverty” (Baker 1), during the 18th
century and was continuing down this path of declination. Ireland is
“helplessly bonded” (Baker 2) to England with its need for land and trade,
which, in reality, only digs itself deeper into hole of economic debt. Jonathon
Swift, an ordained priest and satirist (Elements of Literature 579), realizes
that what people of Ireland were currently doing was not working and they had
to make a social reform in order to better the state of their country. In Swift’s, A Modest Proposal, he uses Juvenalian satire throughout,
specifically through hyperbole and irony, to firmly grasp the people of
Ireland’s attention and persuade them to take action in improving the economy.
Swift uses irony to alert the people
of Ireland of their current economic depression. He uses irony even before he
actually begins his piece with his title. “A Modest Proposal” would be defined
as an idea that appears to be “free from ostentation or showy extravagance”, limited,
or moderate (dictionary.com 1). This is ironic, however, because Swift’s
proposal, “For Preventing The Children of Poor People in Ireland From Being
Aburden to Their Parents or Country, and For Making Them Beneficial to The
Public” (Swift 1) in reality is actually very extravagant, absurd, and a big
deal. Swift’s “modest proposal” is full of irony as well for he says “it will
prevent those voluntary abortions, and that horrid practice of women murdering
their bastard children . . .(Swift 2). This is ironic because his absurd
proposal is exactly that, voluntarily murdering children by eating them.
Swift uses irony
to satirically attack the way Ireland is handling their economic struggles. He
says he “has no children by which I can propose to get a single penny; the
youngest being nine years old, and my wife past child-bearing” (Swift 10). This is ironic because he does not have a
child that he can potentially sell and have eaten so he cannot begin to fathom
what it would be like to experience it for himself which causes him to lose some
empathy along with ethos from the readers. However, Swift uses his ‘economic
planner’ perspective to establish an ethical appeal, through the use of
logistical appeals and numbers. He emphasizes the terrible economic state
Ireland is currently in, “The number of souls in this kingdom being usually
reckoned one million and a half, of these I calculate there may be about two
hundred thousand couples whose wives are breeders; from which number I subtract
thirty thousand couples who are able to maintain their own children, although I
apprehend there cannot be so many, under the present distresses of the kingdom
but this being granted, there will remain an hundred and seventy thousand
breeders. I again subtract fifty thousand for those women who miscarry, or
whose children die by accident or disease within the year. There only remains
one hundred and twenty thousand children for poor parents annually born” (Swift
3). Through Swift’s use of logical appeal, he not only provides credibility for
himself, he also exhibits irony through his calculations by using
understatements like “there only remains” when 120,000 is a big number and calls
Ireland’s current condition under “present distresses” which is a huge
understatement for the deplorable economy they currently face. It is also ironic
that Swift writes from this perspective for he is an ordained priest in
reality, and throughout the piece criticizes his own religion, Roman
Catholicism, “. . .because the number of popish infants is at least three to
one in this kingdom: and therefore it will have one other collateral advantage,
by lessening the number of papists among us” (Swift 4). He is saying that it is
good to lessen the number of priests, when in reality it would be bad for
Ireland who is for the majority Catholic, allowing England to take over yet
another aspect of Irish culture, replacing the major religion with the
immigrant Protestant religion. Along with irony through religion he says “one
thousand families in this city, would be constant customers for infants flesh,
besides others who might have it at merry meetings, particularly at weddings
and christenings . . .(Swift 8). Very ironic for the purpose of these events
are to celebrate people and birth, but he is implying this is when people would
buy infants to eat.
Swift bitterly
criticizes England throughout the piece to emphasize the lack of effort Ireland
has in trying to fix the economy. This is ironic, because he longs to be in
England himself, “I fortunately fell upon this proposal, which, as it is wholly
new, so it hath something solid and real, of no expense and little trouble,
full in our own power, and whereby we can incur no danger in disobliging
England . . .(Swift 9). This implies that Ireland is afraid to disappoint
England in any way for they are completely dependent on them. Another piece of
irony in Swift’s proposal is his bitter attitude towards the “normal” ways of
solving economic problems such as “taxing . . .absentees”, “using neither
cloaths, nor household furniture”, “utterly rejecting the materials and instruments
that promote foreign luxury”, “curing the expensiveness of pride, vanity, idleness,
and gaming in our women. . .” (Swift 8), yet he is perfectly okay with promoting
the absurd idea of eating children.
Swift uses
hyperboles to fully grab the attention of the people of Ireland for the current
way they are handling their economic misery clearly isn’t working. He uses a
very absurd idea of eating children, which is completely unethical and morally
wrong, in hopes to finally make a social reform in Ireland’s economy. He uses
exaggerated imagery such as, “a young healthy child, well nursed is at a year
old a most delicious, nourishing, and wholesome food, whether stewed, roasted,
baked, or boiled. . .”(Swift 3) to gain attention. He also criticizes England
through harsh satire, “I grant this food will be somewhat dear, and therefore
very proper for landlords, who, as they have already devoured most of the parents,
seem to have the best title to the children” (Swift 4). This makes England seem
as though they are the enemy, for they are the reason we must sell our children
like meat in order to get money. The idea of eating children not only proposes
an absurd idea, it also establishes an emotional appeal from the reader, “I
rather recommend buying the children alive, and dressing them hot from the
knife, as we do roasting pigs” (Swift 5). Swift compares innocent children to
animals who are sold for their meat to make profit for their owners. This
establishes empathy from the reader for the innocent children cannot defend
themselves against this way of life and never get the chance to know their true
purpose in life for they are sold like a piece of meat.
Readers develop an
empathy towards the children throughout the piece due to the emotional appeals
and hyperboles used to express the absurd idea of eating children. The innocent
children of the piece directly parallel Ireland during the 18th
century. The children are sold at such a young age, they are still completely
innocent and helpless, which is how Ireland is acting, completely dependent on
England for economic stability. Also the children, although they do not realize
it, are dependent on their neglecting parents who use them for their own
personal gains, “It would increase the care and tenderness of mothers toward
their children. . . provided in some sort by the public, to their annual profit
instead of expense” (Swift 7). This implies both that childhood innocence is
lost, for they are being raised solely to be sold and mothers only care about
children so they can make the most profit from them. This is identical to how
England treats Ireland, limiting their land and religion for their own personal
control and gains. Jonathon Swift uses this Juvenalian satire along with
hyperboles and irony to open the eyes of Ireland and take action to get them
out of this helpless economic state.
Body Parahraph 1:
ReplyDelete-too broad of a topic sentence
-when you put the whole url in there to site your quote, I don't think you needed to do the entire url
Body Paragraph 2:
-create a topic sentence
Body Paragraph 3:
-forgot the quotation marks after your first quote
very good but the main thing you need to change/create is your topic sentences because for some of the paragraphs you dont have one
Introduction:
ReplyDelete-Your topic sentence is great although you might want to try to reword it so that the flow of you're writing isn't disrupted for example you can try saying:"In Swift's a modest proposal, he uses Juvenalian satire, specifically hyperbole and irony to firmly grasp the attention of the citizens of Ireland and to persuade them to take action in improving the economy."
Body Paragraphs:
-Although your points are amazing and you make it clear that you know what you're talking about, non of your paragraphs have topic sentences
-Try to make sure your body paragraphs flow properly, try transitional words to move from one paragraph to the next, look fro this in your sentences too for example "Swift's "modest Proposal" is full of irony as well for he says "It will prevent those..."(Soltis, BP 1)try saying something along the lines: "Another example of Swifts use of irony is.." This gives your paragraph more of a flow and makes each point a continuation of the last one to wrap the paper together more.
Conclusion:
-Finally you added a point to your conclusion, although this point is important it is also important to let the conclusion be a place to end your paper not add to it.
That was a really good essay.
ReplyDelete-For the beginning of the essay, i would switch the sentence structure to "During the 18th century, Ireland was a time of..."
-Like Kendra mentioned, the essay just needs that flow, the transition from one paragraph to the next.
- Maybe include the concept of understatement in your intro/ thesis (unless that's a form of hyperbole?)
- I really like the info that you have in your intro though
It is over all a really good essay.